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This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. | This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]]. | ||
| − | Suggested improvements to the page include: | + | Suggested improvements to the page include: |
| + | *Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence | ||
| + | *Applying links to key words that link to other pages | ||
| + | *Removing links that have been repeated | ||
| + | *Adding more formal language. | ||
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| + | --[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 04:28, 5 November 2016
Rewrite status
This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as Portal:Players and Portal:Players/North America.
Suggested improvements to the page include:
- Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence
- Applying links to key words that link to other pages
- Removing links that have been repeated
- Adding more formal language.
