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== Rewrite status ==
 
== Rewrite status ==
This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]].
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This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor capitalisation, wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as [[Portal:Players]] and [[Portal:Players/North America]].
  
 
Suggested improvements to the page include:
 
Suggested improvements to the page include:
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*Adding more formal language.
 
*Adding more formal language.
  
--[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 04:24, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
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--[[User:Garlic|garlic]] ([[User talk:Garlic|talk]]) 05:48, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

Revision as of 05:48, 5 November 2016

Rewrite status

This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor capitalisation, wording and improper formatting. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as Portal:Players and Portal:Players/North America.

Suggested improvements to the page include:

  • Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence
  • Proper capitalisation
  • Applying links to key words that link to other pages
  • Removing links that have been repeated
  • Adding more formal language.

--garlic (talk) 05:48, 5 November 2016 (UTC)