Talk:Pyyyour

Rewrite status

This page has been manually marked for a rewrite due to its poor wording and linking. Consequentially it has not been featured on pages such as Portal:Players and Portal:Players/North America.

Suggested improvements to the page include:

• Removing the high frequency of commas in each sentence
• Applying links to key words, even if they do not link to other pages
• Removing links that have been repeated
• Splitting up large paragraphs into smaller paragraphs

--garlic (talk) 05:24, 6 November 2016 (UTC)